description of a place

for vanishing point

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Jul 3, 2025 5:40 AM

HERE IS THE PLACE: the blackened face of a nondescript apartment block. Vines suturing the cold wrought iron of a fire escape—like wires holding shut a busted jaw. You, late at night, passing over its image like dust caught in the sclera, or a kind of myodesopsia. It is not quite on the corner, this old face, since the sidewalks, far from orthogonal, converge on a singular point: an insular simplex of concrete. (You wonder whether it would disappear if you looked at it from the right angle: folds of space washed away by the gridlock of the city...)

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2 days ago

You want criticism or are just posting it for fun?

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2 days ago

Just for fun, although you're free to share your thoughts if you'd like

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2 days ago

No, I have nothing really worth saying... sometimes people want the feedback & it's nice to help, but I'd have to intentionally look for flaws which feels mean w/o being asked. I like it as is.

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2 days ago

Makes sense—I'm glad you like it!